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Scene#14

"Enduku Kanna antha denanga unnaav! Dull look neeku set avvadhu!", ani Myra cheppi she hugs Pranav. She places his head between her chest and kisses on his forehead. 

"Nammakam anedhi very important. Trust leka pothe marriage nadavadhu! Ardham ayyinda?"

"Nenu nee wife ni.. neeku nenu antha cheap ga kanipistunnnana? Manasulo okarni pettukoni inkokarini pelli cheskuney antha low class character naadhi kaadu. Nuvvey naa sarvasvam.. nuvvey naa hero! Ardham ayyindha!", ani cheppi she kisses him on his lips.

"Nenu paiki velli neekosam dosa ready chestaanu.. okay na!!", she smiles at Pranav and heads upstairs.

The kitchen upstairs is very small.. just enough for one person. Very small stove .. chaala irukuga vuntaadhi.

She starts cooking dosas. After 1 hour she starts sweating heavily. She finishes making 10 dosas. 2 for herself. 4 for Pranav and 4 for Deepak. She places the four dosas and the chutney in a plate and approaches Deepak. 

Deepak is stunned by Myra's beauty. Her face is sweaty and the sweat is dripping down her face and neck and disappearing between the cleavage. Her nightie is clinging tightly to her chest and Deepak could clearly see that she is blessed with a lot of beauty. 

Myra noticed this and got irritated. "What are you staring at? Focus on the plate not here." 

She placed the food in front of him and left to go downstairs. As she turn around and started walking her nightie clung to her behind. She was looking very sensual. Deepak could not stop staring.

After going downstairs she gave the dosas to Pranav and she started eating the food herself. The boat had wifi and tv set as well. So they both watched movie songs while eating silently. 

"Pranav! I am feeling irritated. I feel soo sweaty. I will take bath and comeback."

She picks up the towel and heads upstairs because there is one common bathroom for all and it is upstairs.

She reaches the upper deck and notices that the boat is rocking more than usual. She enters the bathroom and lets down her hair which was originally held together with pins. Her long, flowing hair, falls all over her shoulders. She turns on the shower hot water and is all set to enjoy a relaxing bath. She notices that she is in a spacious, well-lit bathroom filled with steam and the scent of lavender shampoo. Completely unaware of the outside world, she hums softly while massaging the shampoo into her hair.

Meanwhile, outside the bathroom, Deepak had a couple of pegs of whiskey and he tiptoes up to the door. His heart races with a mix of excitement and fear. Peeking through the keyhole, his eyes widen as he watches Myra in such an intimate setting. He observes her entire beauty in raw natural form. Everything. Everything is in the right proportion. Her top is heavy but so is her bottom. He also notices that the door isn't fully locked. His hands tremble slightly as he reaches for the door, his mind battling with his desire. With a shaky breath, he quietly turns the handle and pushes the door open just a crack.

The door creaks slightly, and Myra instantly turns her head towards the sound. Her eyes meet Deepak's through the gap, and a look of shock and violation spreads across her face.

"Myra, nenu—” Deepak stammers, frozen in place.

"What are you doing?!" Myra's voice cuts through the steamy air, sharp and clear. She quickly grabs a nearby towel, clutching it to herself. "Get out! Now!"

"I’m so sorry, Myra—I didn’t mean to—” Deepak begins, but the stern look on Myra’s face and the anger in her eyes stop him mid-sentence.

"Just go, Deepak!" Myra shouts, pointing towards the door.

Shame-faced, Deepak nods, his face flushing with embarrassment. He backs out hurriedly, shutting the door with a soft click. The sound of his retreating footsteps echoes down the hallway as Myra, left alone in the bathroom, leans against the sink, her heart pounding and her mind racing with what just transpired. She starts crying and tears stream down her face. 

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illogical and confusing sequences vunnayi. Challenge to director and actors to present the story. They matter for any success anyway!

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Scene#15

That night Myra checks to make sure Pranav is asleep and she goes upstairs.

Deepak is relaxing in his room when he hears a sudden knock on the door. 

"Em kaavali Madam gariki?", sarcastically he asks without opening the door fully. 

"Ekkuva cheyyaku", saying this she forcefully opens the door and gets in. 

"Feel ayyava?", she asks him. 

"Deni gurinchi?"

"Ade nenu koncham over ga react ayyaanu ani anipinchindi"

"Neekemundi cheppu.. kottha pelli kuthurivi. Full ga aa kuntoditho enjoy chestunnaav kada" 

"Aaah kuntodiki kaalu okkatey kaadhu adhi kuda panicheyadhu.."

"Enduku vaacchaav ikkadiki? What do you want?", irritatedly Deepak asks her. 

"I just wanted to check on you and say sorry! Pelli ayyina daggara nunchi naa mood naa mental state mottham chaala kashtam ga undi manage cheyyadaaniki. Prathi chinna daaniki chikaaku chaala ekkuva kalugu thundi." saying this Myra starts crying. 

Seeing her cry makes Deepak's irritation go away. He comes closer and she hugs him tightly. 

"Nenu chaala conservative family nunchi vaccha. Neeku telusu kada maa father mother gurinchi.. vaalu chaala strict. 10th/Inter varaku Girls school loney chadiva.. oka abbayi tho matlaadindhey ledu. Nuvvey naa first and only love."

"Sudden ga nuvvu ala nanni chuse sariki nenu shock ayya. Ala react ayya. Munde cheppa kada I like to take things very slow ani."

"Ardham chesko Deepu!"

She kisses him softly on the lips and they both end up on the bed. She removes her nightie and Deepak notices that she is not wearing anything underneath. He also hurriedly undress and their clothes lay in a pile on the floor. 

They both kiss each other and their tongues intertwine. He then starts going down planting a lot of kisses on her cheek, neck and goes lower and lower. 

Pranav meanwhile notices that Myra is not next to her. 

He can hear Myra's loud moans and the rocking movement of the bed from above.

He goes into a state of complete shock. He cries silent tears and tries to sleep through it but he can't.

After a couple of hours Myra dresses up and comes down.

When Myra returns she is very happy with a lot of stress gone and she notices that Pranav is asleep. She carefully sleeps again next to him hoping that he won't wake up. Pranav doesn't react at all and lays still.

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On 4/16/2024 at 8:29 PM, ennasaata said:

last lo fix cheddhaam boss..

Scene#4

Pranav turns 18 and gets admitted into a local engineering college.. Myra also joins the same college as the parents want to make sure that Pranav is doing okay.. and to keep an eye on him.. Myra meets Deepak who is handsome and an athlete.. he plays cricket and football really well.. She starts developing feelings for him.. and Pranav notices that she is spending more and more time with him and how happy she is when he is around.. He also notices her phone buzzing with his messages..

Scene#5

Pranav is filled with jealousy because he compares himself with Deepak.. That night Lakshmi is busy and asks Myra to help Pranav into the bed.

Myra helps him out of the wheel chair and places him on the bed.. He asks her "Do you love Deepak? I think you both would make a good pair" She is stunned and tells Pranav that it is too late in the night and to sleep. That night.. he again starts to try again.. very hard to move his left foot up and down.. he succeeds.. he loses interest in studying at college and has no interest in observing the relationship between Myra and Deepak.. In the college.. at home.. at sleep.. he is obsessed with improving his range of movements.. and slowly day by day he starts making more and more progress.. it improves his mood but he hides his progress because he doesn't want to upset his adoptive parents.. At night he tries to get up from the bed.. and is able to stand but he falls down after a few moments.. he remembers the baby and then tries again and again.. slowly he is able to walk little by little.. Then he hears footsteps walking in his direction.. he quickly jumps back into his bed.. surprising even himself.. It is Myra. She turns on the light and wakes him up. She wants to say something.

Apara babu

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Just now, ennasaata said:

Scene#15

That night Myra checks to make sure Pranav is asleep and she goes upstairs.

Deepak is relaxing in his room when he hears a sudden knock on the door. 

"Em kaavali Madam gariki?", sarcastically he asks without opening the door fully. 

"Ekkuva cheyyaku", saying this she forcefully opens the door and gets in. 

"Feel ayyava?", she asks him. 

"Deni gurinchi?"

"Ade nenu koncham over ga react ayyaanu ani anipinchindi"

"Neekemundi cheppu.. kottha pelli kuthurivi. Full ga aa kuntoditho enjoy chestunnaav kada" 

"Aaah kuntodiki kaalu okkatey kaadhu adhi kuda panicheyadhu.."

"Enduku vaacchaav ikkadiki? What do you want?", irritatedly Deepak asks her. 

"I just wanted to check on you and say sorry! Pelli ayyina daggara nunchi naa mood naa mental state mottham chaala kashtam ga undi manage cheyyadaaniki. Prathi chinna daaniki chikaaku chaala ekkuva kalugu thundi." saying this Myra starts crying. 

Seeing her cry makes Deepak's irritation go away. He comes closer and she hugs him tightly. 

"Nenu chaala conservative family nunchi vaccha. Neeku telusu kada maa father mother gurinchi.. vaalu chaala strict. 10th/Inter varaku Girls school loney chadiva.. oka abbayi tho matlaadindhey ledu. Nuvvey naa first and only love."

"Sudden ga nuvvu ala nanni chuse sariki nenu shock ayya. Ala react ayya. Munde cheppa kada I like to take things very slow ani."

"Ardham chesko Deepu!"

She kisses him softly on the lips and they both end up on the bed. She removes her nightie and Deepak notices that she is not wearing anything underneath. He also hurriedly undress and their clothes lay in a pile on the floor. 

They both kiss each other and their tongues intertwine. He then starts going down planting a lot of kisses on her cheek, neck and goes lower and lower. 

Pranav meanwhile notices that Myra is not next to her. 

He can hear Myra's loud moans and the rocking movement of the bed from above.

He goes into a state of complete shock. He cries silent tears and tries to sleep through it but he can't.

After a couple of hours Myra dresses up and comes down.

When Myra returns she is very happy with a lot of stress gone and she notices that Pranav is asleep. She carefully sleeps again next to him hoping that he won't wake up. Pranav doesn't react at all and lays still.

neeku pani paata modda leda 

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17 minutes ago, KandhiPappu said:

neeku pani paata modda leda 

neekendu ra picchi saale.. nee pani nuvvu chusko... ee thread nacchaka pothe you can skip. 

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On 4/16/2024 at 6:11 PM, ennasaata said:

Scene#1

There is a kid Pranav who is 7 years old.. athanu partially paralyzed.. legs panicheyyavu... his parents are dead.. his neighbors Ramu and Lakshmi athadini datthathu thiskuntaaru. They have a daughter. A beautiful daughter. Her name is Myra.

Scene#2

They help him on his wheel chair and everything. As the kid grows old he asks his adoptive parents if he can get physiotherapy.. they tell him that they can't afford the money to send him for physiotherapy.. and also express worry if the physiotherapy will actually damage him.. and that they already discussed with all the doctors and they all told them it is hopeless.. They tell him that he has them.. and he has nothing to worry about. 

Scene#3

One day.. Myra's cousin comes to stay with the family.. she has a 10 month old baby.. and the baby is crawling all over the home. and enters Pranav's room.. he is in his wheelchair and he observes the baby trying to get up and falling again and again.. repeatedly. as Lakshmi puts him on his bed and leaves.. he focuses on his left leg and tries to move it.. and when he fails.. he tries again.. he keeps trying again and again.. and then there is a slight movement.. he is happy... and falls asleep.. Everyday he spends the whole night trying to make tiny movements... and he succeeds little by little.. One day he attempts to get up from his wheel chair and shouts at Lakshmi that he is able to walk. Lakshmi watches him and gets very angry and irritated.. she rushes towards him and pushes him back into the wheel chair.. "You are a disabled person! This is nature. Accept your fate. What if you fall down? Nee rendu kaalu theyinchestaanu so you don't try this stunt again!" Seeing her emotional state.. Pranav is shocked but doesn't express himself.. That night he resolves not to try and upset his (adoptive) parents again. He stops his exercise.

Randram ante edo goppa story anukoni vacha.. dissappainted

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33 minutes ago, pakeer_saab said:

Randram ante edo goppa story anukoni vacha.. dissappainted

@3$%

 

randram ante em story untadi anukunnav bro..koncham confuse aithundi naku cheppu.

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17 hours ago, ennasaata said:

Scene#15

That night Myra checks to make sure Pranav is asleep and she goes upstairs.

Deepak is relaxing in his room when he hears a sudden knock on the door. 

"Em kaavali Madam gariki?", sarcastically he asks without opening the door fully. 

"Ekkuva cheyyaku", saying this she forcefully opens the door and gets in. 

"Feel ayyava?", she asks him. 

"Deni gurinchi?"

"Ade nenu koncham over ga react ayyaanu ani anipinchindi"

"Neekemundi cheppu.. kottha pelli kuthurivi. Full ga aa kuntoditho enjoy chestunnaav kada" 

"Aaah kuntodiki kaalu okkatey kaadhu adhi kuda panicheyadhu.."

"Enduku vaacchaav ikkadiki? What do you want?", irritatedly Deepak asks her. 

"I just wanted to check on you and say sorry! Pelli ayyina daggara nunchi naa mood naa mental state mottham chaala kashtam ga undi manage cheyyadaaniki. Prathi chinna daaniki chikaaku chaala ekkuva kalugu thundi." saying this Myra starts crying. 

Seeing her cry makes Deepak's irritation go away. He comes closer and she hugs him tightly. 

"Nenu chaala conservative family nunchi vaccha. Neeku telusu kada maa father mother gurinchi.. vaalu chaala strict. 10th/Inter varaku Girls school loney chadiva.. oka abbayi tho matlaadindhey ledu. Nuvvey naa first and only love."

"Sudden ga nuvvu ala nanni chuse sariki nenu shock ayya. Ala react ayya. Munde cheppa kada I like to take things very slow ani."

"Ardham chesko Deepu!"

She kisses him softly on the lips and they both end up on the bed. She removes her nightie and Deepak notices that she is not wearing anything underneath. He also hurriedly undress and their clothes lay in a pile on the floor. 

They both kiss each other and their tongues intertwine. He then starts going down planting a lot of kisses on her cheek, neck and goes lower and lower. 

Pranav meanwhile notices that Myra is not next to her. 

He can hear Myra's loud moans and the rocking movement of the bed from above.

He goes into a state of complete shock. He cries silent tears and tries to sleep through it but he can't.

After a couple of hours Myra dresses up and comes down.

When Myra returns she is very happy with a lot of stress gone and she notices that Pranav is asleep. She carefully sleeps again next to him hoping that he won't wake up. Pranav doesn't react at all and lays still.

mari em ride chesindi myra?

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Scene#16

Next day morning Myra picks up a towel and puts her hair in a bun. 

"Nenu ready ayyi ippudey vachesta.. sare na??" she says to Pranav who doesn't react. 

With full oopu excitement and enthusiasm she goes upstairs. 

Deepak stands near the navigation system of the ocean boat, his eyes fixed on the vast expanse of the sea before him. The boat gently rocks with the rhythm of the waves, a soothing sensation that puts him in a good mood. The salty breeze brushes playfully at his hair, and he breathes deeply, enjoying the fresh, salty air.

Myra steps onto the deck, her steps light and silent. She watches Deepak for a moment, the way the sun outlines his profile, casting him in the soft glow of the late afternoon. A smile plays on her lips as she moves closer, unnoticed.

Suddenly, she wraps her arms around him from behind, her embrace warm and unexpected. "Evaro cheppuko???" she whispers, her voice a melodious song that blends with the seagull cries overhead.

Deepak's initial surprise melts into a laugh, his hands covering hers. "What's this, Myra? Andarini muncheddaamaney??" he teases, turning his head to meet her eyes.

"No, Captain!!!," Myra replies, her nose rubbing against his cheek. "I'm going for a bath, ela snanam cheyyalo nenu marchi poyaanu. Koncham help chestaava???"

With a excitement, Deepak agrees, "ilanti important matters correct ga execute cheyyali.. daggarundi nerpista" They decouple from their embrace, and hand in hand, they go inside to the cozy bathroom.

The sound of running water fills the room as steam begins to fog the small mirror. Myra steps into the shower, the water falling down like a gentle waterfall. Deepak follows, his presence just behind her.

As he reaches for the shampoo, Myra tilts her head back, her hair a dark curtain waiting to be unveiled. Deepak massages the shampoo into her scalp, his fingers drawing patterns like waves crashing gently on a sandy shore.

"Feels nice," Myra murmurs, closing her eyes, the water and his touch easing the tension of the day.

"Only the best feelings for my bangaram," Deepak responds, his tone soft and tender, filled with unspoken affection.

They share a moment, lost in the warmth of the water and each other, their laughter echoing against the tiles.

Myra turns around and pushes Deepak down towards the tub and Deepak complies. She then sits on top of him and lovingly bites his nose. Myra is already wet with anticipation and Deepak slides into her.

"Chaala tight ga ney unnaavey.. ", saying this he starts breathing heavily with pleasure as he feels her gripping him very tightly.

"Shhh... ekkuva matladaku", she says putting her finger on his lips. 

He catches her love handles with his hands and they both start thrusting into each other. 

She then uses both her hands and runs it through his thick hair and brings his face near her chest. Deepak could feel the hardness of her twin peaks. 

"Brahmos missiles laaga intha hard undenti papa.. antha excited aah nuvvu?", saying this he bites one and with his other hand her twists and pinches the other one. 

It sends Myra on the edge and she starts moaning hard and increases the pace of her hip movements.

They both go into a state of ecstatic pleasure and stay there for a while and then Deepak suddenly says.

"Myra.. I think I am about to... "

Myra goes into a shock.. "Wait wait.. lopala vaddu"

She tries getting up but Deepak grabs her by the hips and makes one final thrust.. 

"Ayeee.. ", Myra screams in fear mixed with pleasure.

She makes another frantic attempt this time and gets up completely.. with her hand she finishes him off. 

They embrace each other and lie on top of one another with the hot shower hitting them on their body with both of them completely spent after the intense session.

As they rinse off, they are like two figures in a painting, blurred and beautiful, wrapped in a dance of steam and peace.

Finally, they step out, wrapped in towels, their skin glowing with droplets that reflected the light. "Thank you, Mister Captain," Myra says, her voice a whisper, as she reaches up to kiss him—a kiss soft as sea foam, as brief as the sunset, yet as deep as the ocean they sail upon.

"Thank you for the service Madam!", Deepak says.

"Enti.. service aah??? nenu neeku ela kanipistunna??", she replies pinching his cheeks. 

"Cool down Madam.. ", he says and kisses her one final time. 

They both laugh and Myra heads downstairs. 

As Myra bursts into the room downstairs where Pranav sits in his wheelchair watching TV, her energy is infectious. She has a big smile on her face. "Pranav, you should really come up and see the view! Enta bugundho telusa??

Plus, Deepak neeku boat ela control cheyyalo chepta annaadu. It might come in handy later. Next time manam iddaram matrame we can go on a trip," she suggests with a smile.

Pranav looks unsure, his voice tinged with negativity. "Intiki vellipodhaam, Myra. Naaku ee trip nacchatledu! "

Myra isn’t convinced by his answer. She moves towards him, gently pushing the wheelchair. "Come on, it'll be good for you. Trust me, Kanna! You will feel better once you're up there with the breeze and the sea."

Reluctantly, Pranav allows her to wheel him out of the room and up to the deck.

On the deck, Deepak is ready with a friendly smile, standing beside the boat's controls. "Hey, Pranav! Let me show you how all this works. It's quite interesting once you get the hang of it. Nuvvu 100% sure ga enjoy chestaav!"

Myra smiles at both of them, then says. "I'll leave you guys to it. Nenu kindaki velli antha sardhali. Luggage full ga unpack cheyyaledhu," she says, leaving Deepak and Pranav to themselves.

As Deepak begins explaining the boat controls, Pranav's interest visibly grows. Deepak points out different buttons and levers, explaining their functions with enthusiasm. "Now, why don't you try steering us towards that area?" Deepak suggests, pointing to a remote spot in the sea on the digital map. "It's a great place for fishing."

Pranav hesitates, his voice uncertain. "Are you sure? Koncham duranga undi kada."

"It’ll be fine," Deepak reassures him, pulling out a fishing rod and laying it next to him. "There’s a great spot for fishing there, and we can catch some high-quality fish to cook right here on the boat. Chepala pulusu thini chala rojulu ayindi.. You will like my cooking!"

Encouraged, Pranav takes the helm, maneuvering the boat with Deepak’s guidance. As they reach the designated spot, Deepak stops the boat and turns to Pranav with a big smile. "Nuvvu super fast guru.. intha thondara ela nerchunnaav boss?? Andukey Myra neeku padipoyindi!" he says, winking as he pulls out a bottle of scotch.

"How about we celebrate you learning this new skill?"

Pranav becomes upset after hearing Deepak's comment on his relationship with Myra but controls himself and smiles outwardly.

Deepak carefully watches Pranav as he pours him a peg of scotch. The alcohol loosens Pranav up, his initial tension fades.

"No more, I think that's enough," Pranav eventually slurs, his words slightly blurred.

"Just one last peg, for the sea!" Deepak insists, pouring another.

As Pranav sips the last drink, Deepak looks at him with a big smile.

Deepak stops the boat engine. Other than the waves hitting the boat gently there is no other sound. It was very silent.

"The fishing spot is better from over here," Deepak says, steering Pranav's wheelchair towards a different part of the deck.

He fetches two pair of fishing rods. He hands one to Pranav and he holds another one himself. They both cast the fishing bait and wait in silence. 

Pranav feels the alcohol kick in but observes Deepak's face deep in thought. He feels uncomfortable with Deepak's body language. Something feels wrong. 

"Hey Deepak, I want to go down. Lets fish tomorrow. Scotch koncham ekkuva ayindi. I am not feeling too well."

Deepak's face becomes steely and expressionless. He doesn't react. He doesn't move. He just holds the fishing rod like a statue.

"Myra! Myra! ", Pranav shouts for her. Hoping she comes upstairs and takes him down.

Downstairs Myra clearly hears Pranav's voice but doesn't respond. She increases the volume of the TV and blankly looks at the movie playing in front of her. Her heart is beating a million beats per second and sweat poring down from her face. Her entire body becomes warm with light fever. 

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