Chiraaku kavithvam

[KaadhulaKaajaalu]

IN INDIA
amma peegu chimmukoni..
kammanaina kalalu kani...
swachamaina chaduvu vini..
garvamaia gadapa koni... (Gadapa synonym illu)...
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IN USA
dabbu oka vyasanamani..
ninnu nuvvu ammukoni
kanna pegu thenchukoni
inta laxmi unnadhani..(inta==illu)..

mosam virajimmi.....
yedutivaadi thaladhanni...gelichina raajyaanni..ammaleka kantathadi pettey ooo jeevuda....melukoo ..melukoo..narudaa

[chichi]

nice one

amma pegu "chimmukoni"  ..??

[KaadhulaKaajaalu]

meeru yeppudaina oka c-section surgery choosi untey thelusthundi andi ... blood chimmuthundi...chaala disturbing ...

[KaadhulaKaajaalu]

kavithvam cheppinantha veesy kaadu ani oka sreeyobhilaashi selavichaadu............. Itlu mee sreeyobhilaashi 

[icecreamZ]

nenu kavini kaadhanna vadini kathi tho podustha.........nenu rachayitha ni kaadhanna vaadini raayethi kodata.....

[Quickgun_murugan]

3 minutes ago, icecreamZ said:

nenu kavini kaadhanna vadini kathi tho podustha.........nenu rachayitha ni kaadhanna vaadini raayethi kodata.....

[KaadhulaKaajaalu]

Baaga selavichaaru ...dhanyosmi..

[chichi]

2 hours ago, KaadhulaKaajaalu said:

kavithvam cheppinantha veesy kaadu ani oka sreeyobhilaashi selavichaadu............. Itlu mee sreeyobhilaashi 

em cheppalanukunnav clarity ledhu baa.but good attempt 

pegu thenchukoni ok 

pegu chimmukoni ardham kaaledhu anduke adiga ...