bongu_balraj Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 Preface: This is a story I have written for my short film, ee job tensions, career tensions valla correct ga time dorkatledhu, and movie teeyaleka pothunna. Kani finally ee roju ah story ni Ikkada vesthunna I expect a honest feedback and any changes if needed. Disclaimer: I request not to copy the story and make a short film if in case made, atleast Thanks credits lo nayina na name osthey chalu anna aasha tho ee story ikkada vesthunna. Story: Suresh and Radhika engineering college nunchi love cheskuntunaru, college tarvata suresh oka company lo assistant mechanical engineer ga settle ayadu, Radhika thanu chadivina course ki binnanga software job lo settle ayindhi. Idarru settle ayaka, enno kashtalu padi intlo vallatho fight chesi, convince chesi final ga parents ni opinchi marriage cheskunaru. marriage ayina kothallo chala happy ga trips, tours ala travel chesey vallu. Kothaga pelli ayindhi kanuka korikala gurralamedha sawari chesey vallu. kalakramam lo 2 years ayipoyindi tarvata career lo busy ayipoyi okarini inkokaru pattinchu kovatam manesaru. Idhari madya chinna chinna godavalu start ayayi. Oka roju Suresh Intiki chala late ga vachadu office nunchi, Radhika wait chesi wait chesi sofa loney padukundhi. sudden ga door sound avadam tho radhika lechindhi, door kastha mellaga veyochu kada ani start chesindhi nenu mellaga ne vesanu anadu suresh. Akkada modalayina argument akariki parents, pelli, prema daka vellindi. Radhika Ika crying start chesindhi, suresh ki kopam ochi chi thu dinamma jeevitham ani car keys tiskoni bayataki velli poyadu. Time 10:30 ayindhi suresh malli venakki raledhu Radhika inka yedusthuney undhi, Time 12:30 radhika yedupu apesindhi, kani suresh inka intiki raledhu. Time 1:30 Radhika ki bayam vesindhi, godava padthey padam le intiki ra ani suresh ki phone chedam anukuni phone teesi suresh ki dial chesindhi, ringing but not lifting. malli try chesindhi, - same, Ila try chesthuney undhi. Time 2:30 Suresh phone lift cheyatledhu, radhika ki tension start ayindhi. Oka pakka tension suresh ki emi ayyi untundhi, phone enduku lift cheyatle oka vela badha tho edanna bar lo taaguthunada, leka emanna jarigindha ani raka rakala alochanaltho worry avuthundhi Radhika.em cheyalo ardham kavatle police laki phone chesi complaint ivala, leka thanu velli vethakala anna tension tho edusthu undhi. Time 3:30 ayindhi yedichi yedichi mokam motham vaachi poyindhi malli okasari try chedham ani try chesindhi radhika. sudden ga okathanu phone lift chesadu. athani voice vinaganey evaru nuvvu ani adigindhi radhika, amma naa peru raju nadhi ikkada pan shop Ninna night ikkada accident jarigindhi ah place lo ee phone dorikindhi ani chepadu raju. Sudden radhika gundey pagilinantha pani ayindhi... kallalo nunchi neru agakunda karutthundhi, oopiri agi poyinantha pani ayindhi... oka 2 nimishalu emi ardham kaledhu, avatala pakka nunchi raju hello anadu. ekkada ekkada jarigindi anadhi radhika, address cheppadu raju, hatathuga yedusthuney pargulu teesthu bayalderindhi radhika..... to be continued ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeemaLekka Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 Nice continue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom bhayya Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ara_Tenkai Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 So far boring!! Routine for being rude kani honest ga cheppamanav kada Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uncertainty Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 TLDR; Short ga 2-3 lines lo chappandi vayya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reporter Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 E story meedha already short film vachhindhi video will be coming in few mins konchem edhey pattern lo climax naaku thelusu cheppamantey will reveal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom bhayya Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LivingLegend Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 ye short film chusina love love love ... picha boring Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MRI Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 short films range kadu.. Gemini E tv lo saagedeesi 10diff angles nunchi shorts vesi 5 yrs adinchochu.. gunde pagilindi.. raju news cheppe scene vundi chudu... adi avutey peaks.. Sankranti mundu ee episode vachela chusukuntey channel ratings ekkadiko veltayi.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeemaLekka Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 4 minutes ago, LivingLegend said: ye short film chusina love love love ... picha boring realized and stopped watching long ago Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
150bryant Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 ok next.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feelingbad Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 ee Love payina kakunda... only lust paina yedhayina shrt film theeyachu kadha... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LivingLegend Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 2 minutes ago, MRI said: short films range kadu.. Gemini E tv lo saagedeesi 10diff angles nunchi shorts vesi 5 yrs adinchochu.. gunde pagilindi.. raju news cheppe scene vundi chudu... adi avutey peaks.. Sankranti mundu ee episode vachela chusukuntey channel ratings ekkadiko veltayi.. phone cut chesi accident spot ki velle varaku oka 10 to 20 episodes laginchochu antava Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MRI Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 2 minutes ago, LivingLegend said: phone cut chesi accident spot ki velle varaku oka 10 to 20 episodes laginchochu antava velle darilo.. club nunchi vastunna atta leka bar nunchi tirigi vastunna maaji kaama premikudini testey story inko 1 yr laaginchochu.. haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solman Posted June 27, 2016 Report Share Posted June 27, 2016 short movie ani cheppi serial story cheptunavu endhi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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