అజ్ఞాత అతిధి - (story series written by me) -(part 5 updated)!!

[dasari4kntr]

24 minutes ago, Paidithalli said:

Next dhantlo pakka masala undali ani dB pillala korika bro

ante deentlo saripoledhane gaa...  

[Paidithalli]

1 minute ago, dasari4kntr said:

ante deentlo saripoledhane gaa...  

Haha 😂 Oka kiss scene ala vocchi poyindhanthe 

[dasari4kntr]

2 hours ago, Paidithalli said:

Haha 😂 Oka kiss scene ala vocchi poyindhanthe 

A certificate cinema Kaavala? 😂

[dasari4kntr]

ltt

[Ellen]

@dasari4kntr

Loved the 4th part. Alekhya character arc chala bagundi. Keep it going. Waiting for next part 🤓

[dasari4kntr]

On 5/19/2020 at 6:53 PM, Ellen said:

@dasari4kntr

Loved the 4th part. Alekhya character arc chala bagundi. Keep it going. Waiting for next part 🤓

 

On 5/19/2020 at 11:08 AM, Paidithalli said:

Haha 😂 Oka kiss scene ala vocchi poyindhanthe 

 

On 5/19/2020 at 10:01 AM, ShruteSastry said:

I am able to imagine the whole scene, Superb Writing.

Keep'em coming.

thanks guys...

give some feedback in writing...let me know if too much detailing is boring?

[Amy99]

Next part eppudu? @dasari4kntr you have an amazing story writing skill.! 

[dasari4kntr]

1 hour ago, Amy99 said:

Next part eppudu? @dasari4kntr you have an amazing story writing skill.! 

next part is in progress...

 

[Kool_SRG]

Second Story ah missed this thread.... Chadhuvutha..

[Amy99]

1 minute ago, Kool_SRG said:

Second Story ah missed this thread.... Chadhuvutha..

Nuv kanipadale, db odhilesi vellipoyav anukunna... 

[Kool_SRG]

Just now, Amy99 said:

Nuv kanipadale, db odhilesi vellipoyav anukunna... 

Poye time vasthe povatame

[Amy99]

Just now, Kool_SRG said:

Poye time vasthe povatame

Haha Antha kulaasaanena kool? 

[Kool_SRG]

3 minutes ago, Amy99 said:

Haha Antha kulaasaanena kool? 

Yes antha kusalame meeru ela unnaru...

[Amy99]

Just now, Kool_SRG said:

Yes antha kusalame meeru ela unnaru...

Bagunna, thanks ☺

[Pitta]

2 hours ago, Amy99 said:

Next part eppudu? @dasari4kntr you have an amazing story writing skill.! 

pen lo ink aipoindi anta... stationery shop open avagane rayadam start chestharu anta.. appati varaku chicken cheyadam ela ani nerchukomani decide chesaru